Nice collection. The idea of homelessness particularly in the cold weather is just so awful. Every one deserves a roof over their head.I like the shooting star ones the one best.
Hadn't thought of the homeless. I was just recollecting a night we woke the children and watched a December meteor shower.. Yes everyone deserves a roof.
What a wonderful series -- I can imagine that glimmer of hope in the homeless family -- the wishes rising into the sky to greet the shooting star -- Very nicely done. :)
Nice collection. The idea of homelessness particularly in the cold weather is just so awful. Every one deserves a roof over their head.I like the shooting star ones the one best.
ReplyDeleteHadn't thought of the homeless. I was just recollecting a night we woke the children and watched a December meteor shower.. Yes everyone deserves a roof.
DeleteBuilds up to the great grand finale. Interesting fist haiku....there's a lot one can say about that one...
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful series -- I can imagine that glimmer of hope in the homeless family -- the wishes rising into the sky to greet the shooting star -- Very nicely done. :)
ReplyDeleteUntil the comments, I just thought of them as individual haiku. Now when I read over I am greeted with a series that was a happy accident.
DeleteMay be the last lines should read:
sizzling flash
lights the night
carrying wishes