Monday, February 16, 2015

Fog

doe and fawn disappear

into the dense fog

my heart follows

~


fog and snow

blanket the dusk

 my voice lost 

~


dense fog covers ground

 harvest moon caught in branches

screech owl breaks stillness
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2 comments:

  1. joanna ukFebruary 18, 2015 at 9:29 AM

    just worked it out --- a space between ground and harvest.
    very lovely and I like the screech owl doing its thing :-)

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  2. Adas AlcoveFebruary 18, 2015 at 9:38 PM

    Thanks - I've had to re do this one because the spacing keeps messing up.. Think i've gotten it fixed. I made it worse earlier.

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